Fairylights and Flowers

[mariarose]

I've been working on this all week, I have no idea where it's going, the plot is sort of unfolding as I write to be honest, but it's a start and I'd love some feedback, I haven't written properly in so long and it would be nice if anyone could comment at least on my writing style/improvements/problems with it etc. Thanks again!

The story so far is located here...
http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1690975-Fairylights-and-Flowers