Butterflies

[Ritsuka]

hey. I'm looking for some new poets. something a little calm, easy going and quiet. If any one has any suggestions I would love to hear them ^^.

[acdouglas92]

Its tragic, it’s offensive, it’s disgusting.

Even in death, their beauty is worshiped.
No tears fall for them.
I hate them.

Their life, their death, it’s all pointless.
They are just for show.
It’s like a poetic tragedy.

You waste no time in evoking the deepest and darkest of our human emotions...a truly gripping poem. The language is direct and crisp, which only adds to the effectiveness. Not particularly elegant, I would say, but nonetheless a superb poem.

For a first post, well done. I do hope there will be more to come.

Cheers!

- AC