Up Above

[Alexander III]

I just found this old poem, one of my first ones I believe



Look up above
At the bejeweled river
Of black forgotten love
Watch the lone lilies
Float in and out
As an unheard shout

Listen to the bright sage
Whispering of Life
Of Joy and strife
Of a thousand others
You shall never see.

Yet they are there
Dreaming of you
As you dream of them
In this black forgotten sea...

[PrinceMyshkin]

Very deft. Isn't it interesting to come upon something you'd written and forgot about - and find that it's still worth presenting?

[Dark Muse]

A very lovely poem, it had some wonderful imagery.

[Buh4Bee]

This is sweet and has good rhythm! Glad I caught it, almost missed it.

jersea

[Hawkman]

I rather like this. I like the economy with which you convey the imagery.

Best, H