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[GEETASHREE]

I feel sad
As the sun droops down
Towards the western shore
The sky blushes pink
The clouds laced in gold
Wander by asunder
The moon looms up
In pallid splendour
I feel sad
As the dusk deepens more
The day says good bye
Like an old friend
Parting
After years
Being together

[justice4all]

I really like the images painted throughout the piece. It is well written and enjoyable for the reader. I do think that "droops down" is a little redundant same as "deepens more." Perhaps unnecessary? thank you for sharing!