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GEETASHREE
07-07-2010, 11:21 AM
Wrapped up in myself
I did not realize
That time has passed by
And I am left hither
On the shores of life
Alone

The wavelets lap up
Licking my feet
In cheerful deceit
Beckon me aside
And whisper a polite
Reminder, “Friend!
It is time to return
Home”

blazeofglory
07-08-2010, 02:14 AM
Wrapped up in myself
I did not realize
That time has passed by
And I am left hither
On the shores of life
Alone

The wavelets lap up
Licking my feet
In cheerful deceit
Beckon me aside
And whisper a polite
Reminder, “Friend!
It is time to return
Home”

So beguiling. Said a great deal in a few sentences. An enigmatic fusion of marvel and substance. The poet seems to be lost in the situation versified here to come up with a gem of thoughts

billl
07-08-2010, 02:34 AM
Yes, good one!