Castaway

[Astromaxis]

In this opiated symptoms of white
blue crushed silver
saliva flows
of the creature who is always dancing
powdered into ran - bedfellow of clouds
working meticulously as bees making blue honey
caught another glance
watchful

your words powerfully spoken
so vertiginous in stability
locked are my lips to yours
you do not satisfy quenches of such
but I desire you more
for soul heard you
tasted you more

believing your white suras
believing your blue suras
like heaven suspended
an angel's blood
royal

I am castaway once more

[Bar22do]

It's certainly worthwhile giving up an angelic condition for the true love, but of what avail to shed the royal blood for a disappointment... so my conclusion is: better love when not drowsy or opiated... you won't be castaway ever more...

Thanks for sharing your poem! - best regards - Bar

[Lumiere]

The first paragraph is somewhere else.
What wealth.

P.S.
"somewhere else" in a good way

[Astromaxis]

It's certainly worthwhile giving up an angelic condition for the true love, but of what avail to shed the royal blood for a disappointment... so my conclusion is: better love when not drowsy or opiated... you won't be castaway ever more...

Thanks for sharing your poem! - best regards - Bar


The first paragraph is somewhere else.
What wealth.

P.S.
"somewhere else" in a good way


Hey Guys Thanks for All Your Support *Gives Bear Hug* It seems that mostly Bar and Lumiere read my poems. I hope Allah Almighty blesses you guys because it means A LOT TO ME!!!! :blush:

Bar, you are totally right because I really don;t believe people many a times when people state they can't help who they love (This was also given as a reason for love in a manga called Hot Gimmick by Miki Aihara where though the illustrations are beautiful the condoning of an abusive relationship is never fun. This person's other manga Teacher's Pet has great artwork really but I mean the teacher falls in love with her rapist :confused::ack2: :crash: :skep: :eek2: :flare: :mad: :crazy: :out: for no GOOD REASON except she was a virgin before he does that!!!!! I mean lady what's UP with that?) Because such opiated states demean you and WHO YOU ARE!!!!!!

I actually meant this person in this poem was castaway in the waters of the ocean and didn't mind at all :D :thumbsup:

THANKS AN INFINITY YOU TOO :grouphug: