Wanderlust

[GEETASHREE]

I am a wandering soul
With half etched footprints
On the sands of time
Seeking what
I know not, perhaps
Just saunter by
Like the soft, snowy clouds
On the azure sky
In aimless bliss

[blazeofglory]

Beautifully woven. You toned up my soul. A good blend of sensibility and organization

[Bar22do]

I am a wandering soul
With half etched footprints
On the sands of time
Seeking what
I know not, perhaps
Just saunter by
Like the soft, snowy, clouds
On the azure sky
In aimless bliss

I love the modesty and lack of pretense in this poem... perhaps the best condition for one to find what one knows not... sauntering by, in white clothes of innocence... towards a few grains of wisdom that will stick to one's feet...???

Lovely and subtle.

(you don't need the comma after "snowy", I think)

thanks a lot - and best regards! Bar

[Astromaxis]

Purely beautiful ^_^

[GEETASHREE]

Thanks to all of you. I am humbled by your appreciation.

[justice4all]

Wonderful! I really loved this read. Perfectly worded and paced. Thank you so much for sharing this!

[formality hater]

Beautifully woven. You toned up my soul. A good blend of sensibility and organization

I agree.
Very nice!