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Delta40
07-02-2010, 05:20 PM
The windows needed washing
She felt her outlook
aptly reflected through
grimy panes

Passing headlights
glanced off the house
situated on the ocrner
of Hargreaves Street

Standing there
She felt the truth
of what was coming
in the dulled lights

No amount of tears
would wash away this feeling
or the smudged windows
she inhaled dusty blinds

He did paperwork at her
practiced and intentional
Like a seasoned academic
complacent and narrow-minded

He endowed this status
through detailed arrangement
of papers which had
less meaning than a bread wrapper

The scratchy scrawl
of his fine tip pen
validated his self belief
while she peered out
in search of elusive happiness

Dark Muse
07-02-2010, 06:20 PM
Quite an interesting concept with some provoking imagery. I really enjoyed this even if I am not sure I have completely puzzled it out yet, I think I have a sense of it.

PrinceMyshkin
07-03-2010, 04:52 PM
Brilliant how this metaphor of the window serves as an encapsulization of the entire relationship.