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Lamar Cole
07-02-2010, 05:06 AM
Darling, I remember how pretty you looked.
At the spring dance.
Carnation in your hair.
Flowing strapless chiffon dress.
Color of blue so pure.

Lovely as a beauty queen.
Girl of my dreams.
Sweet as a lily in bloom.
Essence radiating through the room.

Beauty and charm a wonderful combination.
You in my arms a sweet sensation.
I feel like I'm king of the world.
Because God made you my girl.

Bar22do
07-02-2010, 06:17 PM
Darling, I remember how pretty you looked.
At the spring dance.
Carnation in your hair.
Flowing strapless chiffon dress.
Color of blue so pure.

Lovely as a beauty queen.
Girl of my dreams.
Sweet as a lily in bloom.
Essence radiating through the room.

Beauty and charm a wonderful combination.
You in my arms a sweet sensation.
I feel like I'm king of the world.
Because God made you my girl.

This is sweet and moving, except that were I you, I wouldn't start with reminding the N's darling how pretty she lookED... rather, should she know, if the N really loves her, she still looks pretty and always will...
Thanks for this cherry and sweet tasting love poem! Bar