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Dark Muse
07-01-2010, 09:51 PM
Play Me A Melody

Your fingers glide across my skin
play me soft like a violin
soft sighs for a blue desert song
a melody strummed along my thigh
the notes of my body vibrate high
lost within your strings I belong
your harmonies leave me supine
drunk upon your sound like fine wine
for your sweet lullaby I long.

justice4all
07-01-2010, 10:43 PM
I really like this piece. It is short, but very well written. The images are fantastic throughout and consistent.

"lost within your strings I belong
your harmonies leave me supine
drunk upon your sound like fine wine
for your sweet lullaby I long."
-absolutely AMAZING ending here.

Thank you for sharing this! I hope to write as well as you some day! haha. Thanks again!

Dark Muse
07-01-2010, 10:45 PM
Thank you very much!