Thunder Love

[Lamar Cole]

The moon just went behind black clouds.
Wind whistling loud.
Weeping willows dancing proud.
My sweetheart in my arms.
Nature sounding alarm.
Thunder in our love.
Slow and beautiful like a white dove.

[blazeofglory]

The moon just went behind black clouds.
Wind whistling loud.
Weeping willows dancing proud.
My sweetheart in my arms.
Nature sounding alarm.
Thunder in our love.
Slow and beautiful like a white dove.

There is a striking fusion of two contrasting circumstances, yet both seem to intensify the bond of love. Really beautifully written. Few words with a good touch of beauty and substance. I am moved

[dibyendra]

Thunder in our love.
Slow and beautiful like a white dove.

I liked the mood and imagery of your poem! It's nice! :cheers2: