Being Charles Bukowski

[DocHeart]

We can try.

Alright, we probably won't be as good as the real Bukowski, but we can give it a shot.

Here is mine.

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KINKY

I know someone
Who stores her socks
Inside her refridgerator
Because she likes the cold feeling on her feet.

One night I asked her
Does she also like it on other parts of her body
And she said
Go, if you want, to the refridgerator,
All you'll find is socks.

Later when I wanted a beer,
I wondered what happened to old-fashioned girls.

[hack]

Why try to be Bukowski?
What's wrong with DocHeart.
This is good, seems to me.
...peace...

[Bar22do]

Oho, Bukowski would certainly mistake it for his. How many Modiglianis were there? I know a guy in Stambul who paints Van Goghs, Matisses and actually anything one fancies to order from him (the average price for a piece is 200 dollars these days! just imagine, a 200 dollars Dali's Watch)... I would LOVE to read an original DocHeart, though the present well achieved effort, however bukowskian, is an exciting prelude to Doc... so I feel, and thanks and best - Bar

[DocHeart]

When she tore the skin off my skull
By smashing it with her purse
And I saw three floors and four ceilings
I felt she loved me
For the first time.