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morning sun escapes
elbowing through broken mist
captured in clear ice
Hawkman
06-29-2010, 04:55 AM
A fairly brief bid for freedom then...
Lovely Haiku, hack, Best, H
lallison
06-29-2010, 04:57 AM
nice haiku. Beautiful image. striving for freedom but somehow still captured by nature and the elemental world. I see a lovely arctic sunrise.
PrinceMyshkin
06-29-2010, 07:53 AM
The power of brevity! Lovely vignette. Thanks.
Bar22do
06-29-2010, 06:11 PM
this is excellent! a fine image, evocative and effective! thanks hack...
Haunted
06-29-2010, 07:52 PM
wonderful concept, I feel the tension yet the beauty of the imagery takes over.
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