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cogs
06-28-2010, 10:52 PM
loudly blowing up
flinging everything
forcing all away
cracking apart
drowning in flames
diving to the deep,
what not hurled away
complies with the titanic undertow...
the surface, appeased and placid,
a woman now collects herself

Hawkman
06-29-2010, 04:57 AM
Hell hath no fury... :D

nice volta in the final line.

H

Bar22do
06-29-2010, 06:28 PM
The world is deceitful and one should beware of appearences...
I like the unveiling contrast here, as well as the subtle allusion to the movie! thanks cogs - Bar