Emotions revisiting

[zoolane]

Emotions like stream.
Flowing through entwined stones.
Water is transparent as sky.
Reflection of confused expression.
Expression turn to frighted look.

Tears trickle into clear stream.
Tears are warm on her skin.
Wishing warm feel would grow in her.
Like love she once new.

[lacadalet_]

I think, the first verse would be enough, it evokes the nice image of the emotion stream.. The second one is maybe a bit pathetic (but may it's only my view).