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JackieGinger
06-18-2010, 01:29 PM
contractions and concoctions

darkness and depigmentation
fragmentation
scribbling worm of retardation
take one bottle of separation
and chilling pills for liberation

tongue-on-teeth talk
waste of paper
ration-hungry
mind of juxtaposition
slow inducer of death
murders through cigarettes

red dyeing upon her head
sneaking to the inside
leaving conspicuously through her lips
and that is it:
contractions of her brain


Waiting for your comments!

lacadalet_
06-19-2010, 09:50 AM
I was quite surprised how the poem changes in the middle rhythm and content, too. maybe it's lyrics?

Delta40
06-19-2010, 09:08 PM
scribbling worm of retardation.....

this piece sounds like a dark side, very murky

thanks!

JackieGinger
06-20-2010, 09:20 AM
lacadalet - have not thought of it as lyrics - have to consider this idea!

Delta40 - glad you like it!