Rose Colored Glasses

[Lamar Cole]

My life has been beautiful and bright.
Because of our love that feels so right.
Darling, you are the rose colored glasses I wear.
That makes even gloomy days seem fair.

You are the right that outshines the wrong.
You are the love that keeps me strong.
Because of your love, life's lottery I have won.
God knows I'm the lucky one.

[hack]

Very sweet LC.

[Buh4Bee]

I have a horrid time trying to rhyme as you have in couplets, so I admire the attempt. The poem is sweet, but may benefit from some tweaking. I fall prey to cliche as well, but it is usually advised to avoid it.

Such lines as:
our love that feels so right
life's lottery I have won

could be attempted in a more original way. I think the rhyming contributes to the cliche writing. But hey, if this is for your lady love, why change it if it gets the message across? Just FYI suggestions for a later time.