Philosophy at seventeen

[Alexander III]

Blue things

[Pryderi Agni]

Hey, nice symbolism! It created an eerily unique image in my mind just now. I like the mixed modifiers, too; "torn tears", "sapphire dreams"...

Nice!

[hack]

I agree with the previous post.
This is well executed and feels
like something written in some
distant past. Good work.

[Alexander III]

Thank you both :)

Hack I just saw your signature, im loving it :D

[Buh4Bee]

This is another fantastic poem A3. I have read it over about twenty times and each time I am not quite sure what to say other than, this is really fantastic! It is so rich and vivid and dark, but not necessarily negative. It makes utter sense and is intelligent.

Wow! The quality of your writing has really changed for the better over the last six months. This is what LitNet is all about as a forum community that supports writers. Please keep posting!!