Sun and Rain.

[zoolane]

Sun shone brightly as could.
Sitting in beam sun.
I watching the rays of sun.

Weave ring itself through grass.
Petals on the flowers are absorb the rays.
Like sponges in water.

It getting dark, slightly cooled.
I decide that time to go.
Dark clouds appear from nowhere.

Single drop of rain fall from grey sky.
Sun slow disappear behind dark angry cloud.
Begin rain more and more.

[Alexander III]

By the by, Is english your first language ?

[zoolane]

English in my 1st language, I know at write skills are poor to said at least but I am try to have go.

I wasn't much of school person as teenage and had speak difficult early in life as well.

Not everyone is good as most people on here but I know own faults.

[hillwalker]

I think most people appreciate the effort you are making to communicate your feelings here. Your grammar is weak - you accept that - but at least it hasn't stopped you sharing your thoughts with us.

Thank you for that. Poetry is sometimes more genuinely shown in simple thoughts than through fancy words.

H

[zoolane]

Thank you for kinds words and encourage Hillwalker.;)