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virgo27
06-16-2010, 10:28 PM
Dedicated to a friend musing by the sea.

Fictional Fantasy

Come to me, come for me, take my enchanted hand!
Clicking silver rings and jingling ankle bells,
Dance together! into the snows of June’s cottonwoods.

Escape through time’s veil of fictional fantasy.
Pull out and put on the most whimsical costume,
Find true freedom through the mind’s imagination.

May we walk along the banks of the lapping lake,
The clear blue sky falls upon the vast green meadow.
This visual journey is but a pleasing dream.

Let us stop to admire and smell the lilacs.
The yellow wings of the swallow tail butterfly,
Flutter the purple bush’s mating ritual.

Behold a pink peone at bloom’s pinnacle!
Pink as a cherub’s cheek, loveliness shall whither,
Wet petals and lingering perfume to reminisce.

Look up! Across the way at the herd of heifers,
The barn is empty except for uneaten hay.
This lush landscape is my freedom and liberty.

I am protected under my purple brimmed hat.
For if I could reach out and touch your silken face,
This dream would cease to be fictional fantasy.

hillwalker
06-17-2010, 07:04 AM
A wonderful poem - painting a delicate picture in muted pastels perhaps of a delightful summer's day (a touch of Monet or Manet perhaps - I'll admit I always get the two confused to my shame).

Alexander III
06-17-2010, 07:25 AM
Beautiful, best poem I have seen on here in a long while (including all of mine as well)

I really like the style, it is like a prayer to Beauty...

The person to whom it is dedicated must be very fortunate indeed

zoolane
06-17-2010, 09:34 AM
Sound as image that I would think try relax myself. Which I do anyway, at moment the scenic is sea, white dove fly me as bird.

PrinceMyshkin
06-17-2010, 12:14 PM
What lushness! What precision with which you pick out and celebrate every phenomenon! Congratulations.

libernaut
05-15-2011, 04:00 PM
nice poem

virgo27
05-15-2011, 06:34 PM
This is one of my favorites.

Sano
05-15-2011, 06:47 PM
What a lovely poem! I like very much how it is able to bring the image of the fantastic scenario in the mind of the reader. I also liked very much the last stanza. Truly beautiful!

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05-15-2011, 06:51 PM
WOw! Kudos to you!

I usually love tales of magic and fantasy. Even though, no offense, that didn't have too much magic or anything of that such, it was lovely. I didn't really like the barn part.