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ur_shadow89
06-16-2010, 03:18 AM
And with this
I shall slip away,
Away, where I should be
To a place that once I called my own,
Nowhere, but in my isolation;
There I shall lie, silently.

Delta40
06-16-2010, 04:24 AM
This verse sounds like a beautiful ending to some mysterious fascinating story

hillwalker
06-16-2010, 05:18 AM
This poem manages to convey a moment of despair and show the reader the briefest glimpse behind its creation. Really good.

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ur_shadow89
06-16-2010, 06:59 AM
Many thanks Delta & hillwalker for your comments.

PrinceMyshkin
06-16-2010, 07:19 AM
It's commendable that you should deal with a moment of such despair in such a restrained, economic way.