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Thinking
06-15-2010, 02:09 AM
hmmm....We are sitting on a couch in a cafe...holding our respective cups of coffee after dinner.

He is facing me...knee folded close to mine.

There is a perfect little gap between his knee and my knee.

I concentrate on ignoring it as he tells me about how he managed to escape from his colleagues and their demands of lunch on his birthday....hmm..I mean why in the candle light dinner one would want to know what had happened to the other partner in his office...?

And I was so not interested that I almost don't notice my coffee is about to spill.

Almost.

"Woops," I say as I adjust my hand.

He looks at me...smiles, and continues his story.

I look at him...try to listen to his odd time story...

And I'm still aware of the gap.

Then...for what I believe to be for emphatic purposes...or in some excitement...he places his hand on my knee.

My heart races....and I must have exhibited some expression because he immediately retracts his hand.

"I'm sorry," he says.

"It's fine," I reply, sipping my coffee.

"No, I'm not like you know--" he stammers.

I look at his embarrassed face and say..."No that's fine..it's okay...after all I am your wife...lol"

I take his hand and place it back on my knee. "See?" I say.

We then look at each other, then back at his hand on my knee. Suddenly we burst into laughter.

"Okay never mind," I say, laughing. "Take your hand back." I toss his hand from my knee.

"Thank you," he says. I take another sip and see that his leg has unfolded.

I look at him and smile. "You're welcome."

hmmm....

hillwalker
06-15-2010, 10:39 AM
I'm glad I spotted this new piece of yours hidden away.

I normally only comment on stuff in the Poetry or Short Story threads - and only to stuff I like. Your writings always brighten my day.

You write in a very simple, innocent way that is a breath of fresh air. You seem to have a playful sense of humour (in your stories and in your life).

Continue to look at life this way - and thanks for sharing it with us.

Best wishes again, H

Thinking
06-15-2010, 02:20 PM
hillwaker...your comments always made my day...cause you always find something nice and new to say about my writing....

English is not my first language...I hope you have detected so many flaws but I am working on it...

Thank you so much for taking out time for me....I am honored.

hillwalker
06-15-2010, 05:15 PM
I hope you have detected so many flaws but I am working on it...

You do a very good job of expressing yourself so elegantly and eloquently. If there were any unforgiveable flaws I would point them out (lol) but your written English really is a credit to you.....

H

Psycheinaboat
06-15-2010, 07:56 PM
I just found this piece. I need to look for more of your writing; I enjoyed this short piece a great deal!

Thinking
06-15-2010, 11:53 PM
Dear Hillwaker....thank you so much..you will do me a favour if you do that....

thanks again for such genuine reply.

Thinking
06-15-2010, 11:55 PM
Psycheinabout : you flattered me....I will sure post more here time to time...

you may also find my writings on my simple blog...

http://thinking-lifeandyou.blogspot.com/

I am honored that you came.