Dream World

[Lamar Cole]

Soft and mellow.
Sweet like jello.
That's how you felt when I held you on the dance floor.

Eyes closed.
As we took our whirl.
Felt like I was in dream world.

Bodies entwined as they played our favorite song.
Sparks that you send.
God I prayed that this slow dance would never end.

[lacadalet_]

... "Eyes closed.
As we took our whirl.
Felt like I was in dream world." ...

that's really worthwile.

[zoolane]

lovely poem about about lovers have dance.

[Buh4Bee]

I like this one. The poem expresses intense emotion that anyone who has ever slow danced with someone they like immediately can relate too.

[Jesterhead]

this was emotional and had nice imagery, even though it was very brief I could still feel it. Maybe alittle too sweet and simple for my taste but I still like it.