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Lamar Cole
06-14-2010, 05:09 PM
Soft and mellow.
Sweet like jello.
That's how you felt when I held you on the dance floor.

Eyes closed.
As we took our whirl.
Felt like I was in dream world.

Bodies entwined as they played our favorite song.
Sparks that you send.
God I prayed that this slow dance would never end.

lacadalet_
06-19-2010, 09:56 AM
... "Eyes closed.
As we took our whirl.
Felt like I was in dream world." ...

that's really worthwile.

zoolane
06-19-2010, 10:09 AM
lovely poem about about lovers have dance.

Buh4Bee
06-20-2010, 09:50 PM
I like this one. The poem expresses intense emotion that anyone who has ever slow danced with someone they like immediately can relate too.

Jesterhead
06-21-2010, 01:55 PM
this was emotional and had nice imagery, even though it was very brief I could still feel it. Maybe alittle too sweet and simple for my taste but I still like it.