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Biggus
06-14-2010, 04:14 AM
How do you tell the woman that you love?
The woman that always fitted you like a glove
Your lover, your friend and your confident
How do you tell her of your discontent?

How do you tell the woman for whom you care?
That you are no longer in love with her
The woman you love but no longer desire
Kind and caring but unable to light your fire

How do you tell the woman that you love?
The woman that always fitted you like a glove
Where do you begin? Where do you start?
How do you tell her and not break her heart?

Hawkman
06-14-2010, 05:29 AM
Tragic poem, Biggus.

I guess the answer is, you don't. Maybe you just go ahead and have an affair (or wait until she does).

I like this, H

Delta40
06-14-2010, 05:57 AM
...or focus on the World Cup!

seriously, honesty and transparency can hurt but the healing process is much better than deceit and betrayal.

Biggus
06-15-2010, 04:36 AM
Thanks H
Thanks Delta

PrinceMyshkin
06-15-2010, 08:00 AM
What a wonderfully honest and heart-wrenching poem! My empathy - and my congratulations.

Biggus
06-16-2010, 04:22 AM
Thanks Myshkin

zoolane
06-16-2010, 04:44 AM
Your poem is no true word wrote for person who is position, even know it tragic but elegant written and personal I have always found sometime write poem or letter to person in question will help open line communications.