Night & Day

[oldbrownspice]

Quiet nights & lonely days are not the way.
but for me, I must say,
I like quiet days & lonely nights.
for I can look out and see the lights.

ahah, I wrote this down, VERY long time ago.

[PrinceMyshkin]

I salute you for the economy of this!

[blank|verse]

(I'm not sure if the last line is part of the poem or not.)

As it stands, the first four lines read like a quatrain in search of a sonnet; you should continue with this one and try to flesh it out, I think it deserves it.

[Jesterhead]

I agree with BV, It seems like a good start to a poem.

[oldbrownspice]

yeah will do.
and the last line isn't on the poem.

[Delta40]

I agree that this sounds like the beginning of an interesting poem.

[lacadalet_]

I enjoy your poem. I always like to read rather shorter poems - but with a surprising idea - and without the last line that poem is a bit usual (for me).
With that line, however, according to me, it's smart ;) great one... flash story...