Wandering

[Alexander III]

Is it just me or are most of the poems up in here, uterly crap ?

[Buh4Bee]

This poem is one of my most favorite by you. I think it would benefit from some editing.
This line:
As they flutter trough the mosaic of eternity… The pieces as immutable as the certainty of mutability

Seems to me that you are philosophizing about fate/destiny as predetermined, but the idea is not developed any further in the poem.

The poem seems to lose momentum after the white bear. It is still following the same ideas, but it seems like you got tired and lost steam.

Finally the end? You bring in this third party, "my dear". Who is this person and what do they have to do with the rest of the poem?

through is spelled: t-H-r-o-u-g-h not tRough

Really loved this poem.

[Alexander III]

hehe I cant spell to save my life...not an admirable quality in a poet I suppose :D

my dear is the Fox

I think the final 3 stanzas are pivotal, the greatest and most important parts

[Buh4Bee]

OK, I guess maybe the idea of a "we" through me off. But I can see how the dear is the fox.