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Delta40
06-06-2010, 05:45 PM
I'm trying so hard
to understand
what is being said
but its pointless
with an epileptic head
where the hell
are my little orange pills
I can't find them
at a time when I
need them most
I rang a friend
at 5.30 am
I don't think I'll last
the time it takes
for her to arrive
but I hope I can
So I'll stay on Litnet
till help comes

Bar22do
06-06-2010, 05:56 PM
Get hold of LitNet it's the best remedy! even though not orange (but look under your keyboard for the little pills!). And from what you say so deftly one understands that you also know what's being said! Ah, and: HOPE is stronger than THOUGHT. Be well, for this poem is well done. Bar

Delta40
06-06-2010, 06:11 PM
a hearty bowl of porridge
helps a great deal
I shouldn't be cooking
any type of meal
it upsets other people
and puts them in doubt
but I can't just lie down
and wait this feeling out

(checked myb bags and drawe3rs - no blasted magic orange pills!!!)

PS I hate rhyme mode thinking (lol)

MorpheusSandman
06-06-2010, 10:52 PM
Did you actually type this while waiting? There is a sense of nervous energy in it. If so, I hope you were/are all right!

hillwalker
06-07-2010, 07:16 AM
I also hope this story has a happy ending.

Talk about suffering for one's art..... I can think of easier methods of seeking inspiration (lol).
Having said that, I did enjoy reading them. H

Hawkman
06-07-2010, 07:37 AM
You have turned your suffering into art. You are a transducer of poetry!

PrinceMyshkin
06-07-2010, 07:42 AM
WE are always here, orange pills or not, and as you can see from the foregoing there are many of us who care for your poems - and for you.

Delta40
06-07-2010, 08:03 AM
thanks everyone. You're my virtual family! I am feeling much better now and no seizure which is always a good thing.