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Delta40
06-03-2010, 07:24 PM
I retire to bed
and in my head
I pray silently
for guidance
As dreams will
my dead Grandma
drops by
crinkling sight
twinklin light
she has seen
many things
'May I drink tea
with you?
Perhaps nibble
a biscuit or two?'
I rub her hand
'Of course you can!'
I wake with peacefull heart
understanding the part
of me who is wise

Hawkman
06-03-2010, 07:47 PM
With you all the way with this one. It conjures a magical vision of comfort and memory and the healing properties of sleep. Very nicely expressed.

H

PrinceMyshkin
06-03-2010, 08:03 PM
What a lovely playful tender flow to this! Thanks.

Delta40
06-03-2010, 10:24 PM
thanks guys. it was hastily written and I will fine tune it later.

MorpheusSandman
06-04-2010, 11:07 PM
A very gentle piece full of tranquility. I always like art that approaches death with this kind of attitude.