plz i beg u for ur feedback

[theriddler89]

i dont know if i have posted it propply i dont know if pep can just reply to the poems i post.if not i dnt know how to chnage it can someone help me,otherwise if u can reply to my poems plz pep in the world i beg for feedback good or bad i need to know if i am any good at the one thing that i think i am,i dnt mean to sound desperate or silly butplz some feedback would be nice even if u send me a message

thanks tarryn x x x

[PrinceMyshkin]

i dont know if i have posted it propply i dont know if pep can just reply to the poems i post.if not i dnt know how to chnage it can someone help me,otherwise if u can reply to my poems plz pep in the world i beg for feedback good or bad i need to know if i am any good at the one thing that i think i am,i dnt mean to sound desperate or silly butplz some feedback would be nice even if u send me a message

thanks tarryn x x x

Sometimes it takes the participants here a while to settle in with a poster's style and/or personality. Hopefully, comments will come.

[milktea]

I will read your poems now and try to leave a review.

[_Shannon_]

Sweetie...please try to take the time to use full type, rather than text type. It's so off putting and distracting when we're trying to talk about writing and literature. Can I recommend that you go back and fix all of the spelling and such?

And gently, I want to recommend to you to try to read some poetry. Not to lose your voice--but to help you organise your thoughts so that they are not lost in your poem. You have big feelings and that is awesome! But to garner the empathy or emotional response in your readers it's important for the form to match your purpose.

[jaguar12345]

Riddler sure does riddle me with his/her heart-stopping sentences. Maybe you can use a little bit of periods here and there. And sure, I'll leave some feedbacks for yah poems.