Monday Morning

[Delta40]

at the bus stop
we huddle
the icy remants
of nights breath
makes day break
sleep a little longer
we bundle ourselves
in gift like wrappings
sacrificing warm comfort
for financial well being

[Hawkman]

Beautifully expressed, crisply observed little poem. you have a real facility for elegently, minimalist expression.

[Delta40]

thanks Hawk. I have been told a number of times about my minimalist expression....and yet I talk endlessly! go figure!

[hillwalker]

I have been told a number of times about my minimalist expression

This is obviously where the true artist in you emerges - you have the knack of condensing so much into so little.