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dara.cv
05-24-2010, 02:13 AM
For just a moment, I took a breath and shared it with the earth.
Even though that moment was almost immeasurable, in this whole wide universe,
its existence felt like a lifetime.
That breath that meant so much and woke me up,
from the disconnected perception;
that’s what keeps me alive.
I thought that holding my breath underwater was difficult, that is, until I realized,
I hold my breath sometimes all day…

-Angel Bradburn

PrinceMyshkin
05-25-2010, 11:05 AM
Marvellous use of breath as the metaphor of both life and the expectation that often seems to whole of life.

hillwalker
05-25-2010, 01:58 PM
A lovely poem - as much a case of 'hold that thought' as 'hold that breath'

MorpheusSandman
05-25-2010, 10:49 PM
I love the sense of Zen-like peacefulness in the piece. A sense of feeling a revelational oneness with life around you. The piece is like a breath of fresh air in itself.