a farm for pain

[tasnim]

war is a farm for pain
planting our children
screaming the song of dawn and the beginning

[Lumiere]

The last line.
:eek: - in a good way.

I liked how you brought something so nourish-orientated as a farm and planting to the idea of war.

[dizzydoll]

I couldnt agree with you more, and I echo Lumiere's comment. :biggrin5:

women can stop all wars, they have that power

[Hawkman]

Helen started one lol

[PrinceMyshkin]

The title alone is worth the price of admission. I wish it had gone on somewhat more but what you have presented is a flash of lightning. I join the others in welcoming you to the forum.

[Bar22do]

Helen started one lol not Helen, but men that fought for her... (just a reminder, Hawk!)

a farm for pain
war is a farm for pain
planting our children
screaming the song of dawn and the beginning

tasnim - welcome here and your few words give a lot to think.... Thanks - Bar

[Jesterhead]

I like this, it said a lot in few words.

[tasnim]

Thanks everyone for your comments, and thank you for the welcome PrinceMyshkin and Bar :)



The last line.
:eek: - in a good way.

I liked how you brought something so nourish-orientated as a farm and planting to the idea of war.

I'm glad the last line is :eek: in a good way. I thought it might be too bombastic, but it stuck, along with an image of mandrakes. I'm not much good at revising my writing.

"Nourish-orientated" is a good word :biggrin5:




women can stop all wars, they have that power

That's a nice thought. :)



The title alone is worth the price of admission.

Thank you!

[Jesterhead]

yea no'one thinks of fighting when they see a topless girl.