reactive writes

[Delta40]

Don't you heed
my reactive writes
just close your ears
while I bet the ground
through misery's sight
and piteous sound
grit your teeth
while I scratch the lines
of reactive writes
which tumble down

[neilgee]

I like this, it hurtles headlong at you from the off and the words scratch and reactive bounce well off each other near the end. these style of poems are hard to do well and maybe you can improve on this but I do like the way you put your words together.

[Delta40]

thanks. I missed 'a' in beat

[PrinceMyshkin]

Oh, haven't we all had this feeling, and how deftly you put it.