seizure

[Delta40]

I am so fitty fitty
but that is okay
I miss huge chunks
and have nothing to say

I stop dead in my tracks
and feel zero in life
I have an attack
of the convulsive type

Bite my tongue
wet my pants
not everyone
can do this act

I read the signs
when I lose my cool
but you don't mind
Of course you do!

[MorpheusSandman]

I like the off-setting nature of the piece which, on the one hand, feels so light because of the short lines and rhymes and, on the other hand, is actually quite disturbing. Like usual you have a knack for getting the most impact out of the least.

[dizzydoll]

Just another of life's possible nightmares. Well done.