moving on

[Delta40]

didn't I just tell you
I don't do anniversaries?
you want to bookmark
grief of the untestified kind?
go ahead then
you won't catch me
wearing that old outfit!

[dizzydoll]

I agree with you. Your head is on the right way round. Much expression in these few words. Excellent.

[PrinceMyshkin]

Like a moment from a relationship captured in the flash of a light-bulb!

[blazeofglory]

didn't I just tell you
I don't do anniversaries?
you want to bookmark
grief of the untestified kind?
go ahead then
you won't catch me
wearing that old outfit!

I like your dramatic start! I know nobody can catch you with an old outfit and I never try. I too do not like anniversaries for they have nothing of substance to commemorate. I hate commemorations and people do it out of liability. And what have to do with such occasions-to revisit the domain of strife-ridden events and moment of griefs.

I do not know this is what I found unfolded to me and that the beauty of a poem is such that different people alight in different interpretations.

[Jesterhead]

It seemed to express a lot of emotions, it was an enjoyable read.

[Tournesol]

Hey Delta.

I enjoyed the poem. It's very much like something I would write - very concise and no-nonsense.