the lake

[peter7805]

is there a lady in the water?
if it is a mermaid
that would be great
the lake is so clear on the bottom
I can see the black mud
but it can not prevent
a beautiful reverie
just like life
the transparent reality
let me see the agony
but it can not let me forget
the hope

[dizzydoll]

This is a very deep little poem. I'm just wondering, the word: prevet is that supposed to be "prevent" by any chance?

Your words smack of the truth tho, one must never forget HOPE. Good job.