Our Existence

[K K Srivastava]

So often,
our ears and our eyes are led astray
unfathomable states our mind carries
seek an exit-outside-
solemnity hangs in limbo
diversity brings us hopes but in disarray.
Our reluctance
makes us unbeliever
under the latent surface lurks a sense
chagrining us-the indifference of the world
intimation of our collective presence
makes our existence complete nonsense.



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[Delta40]

Having read this, I feel like my being is some logical deduction and nothing more

[PrinceMyshkin]

This strikes me as raw, personal philosophy, not heightened in any way by poetry.

[hillwalker]

A neat kick in the pants to existentialism. A very simple piece that resounds with man's infantile longing to mean something.

[cogs]

i love the alliteration.