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NikolaiI
05-06-2010, 03:26 PM
I Walk Through this Golden Morning
and marvel at these flowering trees
of pink and purple and green,
and I can't help but say,
"Nam Myoho Ren Ge Kyo."

Each tree stands in non-duality,
a bridge between earth and sky,
a cornerstone of this Universe,
symbolic of the nameless Dao,
a part and complete representation of this Dharma realm,
a Pure Land filled with Lotus flowers
as the building blocks of reality,
and Buddha guides as its denizens,
each of which posessing complete freedom of movement
and matchless strength, beauty, wisdom, compassion,
patience, humility, and all other divine traits.
I enter this land and return, by stepping through the opening,
"Nam Myoho Ren Ge Kyo."


If you and I are meant to love one another,
May I write words of wisdom and beauty
May every breath come perfectly
May the leaves of Autumn fall
In a pattern according exactly to God's will,
Will every star move as it should
Then I will love you true, forever.

As I walk along this golden morn,
To the side of my path left and right
grow tall, flowering trees, into and out of the infinite reality -
purple, white, blue, green, pink and gold,
their flowers fall along the path.
All shines with radiant, divine beauty
If any should suffer -
May they be cured of it.

Each breath of mine rises and falls
into the oceanic wisdom emptiness
of the essence of every Buddha-form,
temporarily mistaken to be growth of trees,
penultimately realized to be waves of light.

If you and I are meant to love each other
for all our Days and in God's Sight,
May our vision be cleared of all distortion,
May we see the sun's divine beauty
In every day and night.
May we live in love and giving,
And see all the beauty in life.

Buh4Bee
05-06-2010, 04:20 PM
This reminds me of what a mature person might think before declaring his love for another. A lovely poem without sappy sentimentality.

dizzydoll
05-06-2010, 04:39 PM
Gosh, I am sorry I didnt see this earlier. I will have to read it on the morrow.. I am weary and tired now, its late.
No doubt its a good poem but alas it will have to wait. http://serve.mysmiley.net/animated/anim_05.gif (http://www.mysmiley.net)

PrinceMyshkin
05-06-2010, 04:48 PM
Yes, it is lovely, very soulful. I assume "Nam Myoho Ren Ge Kyo." is a Buddhist saying? Would you mind translating it for us?

hillwalker
05-06-2010, 05:24 PM
Not wishing to step on anyone's toes but check this out, Prince

http://www.comp.glam.ac.uk/pages/staff/srharris/nmhrk/whatis.htm

PrinceMyshkin
05-06-2010, 05:39 PM
Not wishing to step on anyone's toes but check this out, Prince

http://www.comp.glam.ac.uk/pages/staff/srharris/nmhrk/whatis.htm

Many thanks for the link and NAM-MYOHO-RENGE-KYO to or for you...

MorpheusSandman
05-06-2010, 06:49 PM
This is a very Zen-like, peaceful, accepting take on the nature of, well, nature and love with some incredibly striking lines. I especially loved "Each breath of mine rises and falls || into the oceanic wisdom emptiness". My only suggestion would be to trim it sum. You do have a lot of lines that seem to repeat the same concept. I think this would work better in 3 tight stanzas opposed to 5.

tailor STATELY
05-08-2010, 12:44 AM
Very beautiful.

Rich. Deep enough for a few more reads. And then meditation.

Well done !

qimissung
05-08-2010, 08:21 PM
a poem of matchless beauty!

dizzydoll
05-11-2010, 02:32 AM
Eventually I got round to your poem, to be honest it slipped my mind and now I found it on page 2.

You always write such beautiful poetry Nikolai. Bless your soul, its poems like this which reminds all of us of the marvel we call "Life".

NisreenS
05-11-2010, 03:00 AM
I Walk Through this Golden Morning
and marvel at these flowering trees
of pink and purple and green,
and I can't help but say,
"Nam Myoho Ren Ge Kyo."


Hi ! I think you don't need anybody to tell you that the opening of this poem is very beautiful. Thank you for giving me such a beautiful piece to read this morning.

NikolaiI
05-25-2010, 01:10 PM
Thank you everyone.. I just remember to search for it today to see if anyone had commented. Hope you all have a great day.

NikolaiI
05-25-2010, 01:13 PM
Thank you everyone.. I just remember to search for it today to see if anyone had commented. Hope you all have a great day.