The Answer

[NineLives]

I've taken it down.

[allislostfornow]

*Shifts eyes in anticipation* Ya know, I don't normally go for this kind of content. But I have to say, I felt compelled to read it after the first two months. Can't wait for the next installment...

Only weird criticism I have is the odd lack of quotation mark breaks in the action of the person speaking. As if, they, themselves, were stating that they were 'shaking their head' as they spoke. But that's it. Nice work.

[NineLives]

Thanks for picking up the dialogue error. I tried to fix it but the editor stops after a certain number of edits, I guess.