Handscape

[Delta40]

Ruptured fabric of
dissected hope

Squirm
where defection lies

My replete void

hollows through

pointless
fingers

[Bar22do]

Sharp and poignant to the point of a blackout! Naked. Helpless. Your poem must come from afar... penetrating and merciless, daring, more... - thank you Delta - Bar

[Delta40]

thanks Bar - an 'I can't sleep at 2.00am' effort!

[hack]

Cool, I like it Delta.
Love the title, perfect.

[Bar22do]

thanks Bar - an 'I can't sleep at 2.00am' effort!
shows how I react to insomnia... (and your poem's worth bumping!)

[MorpheusSandman]

I love minimalism and I think you do a great deal with so few words here and some select line breaks. Excellent.