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Dark Muse
05-01-2010, 05:44 PM
My Eden

Falling into you
I slumber in your meadow
beneath the breeze of your touch

Lost inside of you
I want to swim in your pools
dancing under your sweet rain

hillwalker
05-01-2010, 05:46 PM
A sweetly sensuous poem - with a summery feel about it too.

Nicely done

Dark Muse
05-01-2010, 05:46 PM
Thank you!

MorpheusSandman
05-01-2010, 10:51 PM
Yeah, this is really gorgeous. Evocative of some of the best Haiku's I've read that combine humanity and nature in glorious ways. A superb piece, DM.

Dark Muse
05-02-2010, 12:42 AM
Thank you!

Maryd.
05-02-2010, 12:59 AM
Nice one, dear.

dizzydoll
05-02-2010, 02:08 AM
As always a true expression of yourself. Gentle and loving. :biggrin5: