Rain

[Lamar Cole]

The rain falling softly upon her face.
Takes her to a magical place.
The rain falling softly in her hair.
Lets her soul float upon the air.

The rain touching her lips.
Give her the breath of life in little sips.
The rain falling softly from the sky.
Lets her know that heaven.
Is where good souls fly.

[tailor STATELY]

Very touching.

Just what I needed before I bend my knees in prayer. G'nite.

[blazeofglory]

The rain falling softly upon her face.
Takes her to a magical place.
The rain falling softly in her hair.
Lets her soul float upon the air.

The rain touching her lips.
Give her the breath of life in little sips.
The rain falling softly from the sky.
Lets her know that heaven.
Is where good souls fly.

This is a very interesting poem. I like it for it touches upon a subject that uncovers the primordial love that bonded two humans together. Love today is not different from the way it was in conceived millenniums ago.

I like it as it expresses some of the deepest feelings in us