Lovely Dream

[Lamar Cole]

Such a lovely dream.
Sailing on the waves of love with my sweet thing.
Such a lovely morn.
Having you in my arms.

Such a wonderful day.
The day your love came my way.
Such romance.
Our love has been one long slow dance.

[MorpheusSandman]

It's a very sweet piece. I might recommend breaking up lines 2, 6, and 8 just to to create a sense of symmetry.

[Buh4Bee]

Reminds me of a poem a spouse might write for their partner (beloved) on an anniversary celebrating a few decades.