Culture Clash

[chimney_swift]

I will not blame myself. I have not done anything wrong. If it is me that he is finding something wrong with than he can always ignore me or distance himself from me. I do not have to adhere to anybody’s idea of right and wrong.

He is not showing me any respect. I do not know why he so suddenly feels this way about me. I am tired of being misunderstood. I am tired of making concessions for everybody except for myself.

It was not always like this. Maybe he has learnt that he is not so strong? He never used to worry and now he worrys all the time.

I was a weak because I believed my talent was that I would go further than everybody else. Now I have met somebody more desperate than me. I will fight him if I have to but I will count it one among my moments of weakness.

[James_Patrick]

I think that this is perhaps insightful. It's good that this is short, because reading something like this for a long time might be exhausting. I have to admit, that I don't really care about the narrator or the subject, but that's because I don't really get to know them. I guess I was looking for something more like a story.
I wou'd like to read one of you stories if you have any.

[MarkBastable]

What is this for?

[Hayseed Huck]

Impossible1

A story with nothing that can be sensed.

No objects.
No details.

Incredible.

Abstractions only.
**

Quick liberty.
**
I will not blame myself.

I will bash my face with this brick I picked
up in the hallway, but I will not blame myself.

I have not done anything wrong, but I want to
sneak into my sister's attic hideaway, find
her diary and read her accusation about me.
***

Or something like this ...

HH

If it is me that he is finding something wrong with than he can always ignore me or distance himself from me. I do not have to adhere to anybody’s idea of right and wrong.

He is not showing me any respect. I do not know why he so suddenly feels this way about me. I am tired of being misunderstood. I am tired of making concessions for everybody except for myself.

It was not always like this. Maybe he has learnt that he is not so strong? He never used to worry and now he worrys all the time.

I was a weak because I believed my talent was that I would go further than everybody else. Now I have met somebody more desperate than me. I will fight him if I have to but I will count it one among my moments of weakness.

[chimney_swift]

Damn him why is he whistling like that? He is in the other room and I can hear him through the window. He wasn't bloody whistling before he knew I was down here. He called to me, "is that you?" and I replied and ever since then he has been whistling and singing songs. What, is he trying to intimidate me? What the hell did I do to deserve this? Damn him! Damn him!

[Hayseed Huck]

This rewrite


good

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