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Revolte
04-19-2010, 05:08 AM
Splashes of red
Upon layers of blue;
Spray pints of revolt
In the depths of the tune.
The tune of the artist
Creating his piece,
The soil of soul,
His projected beliefs.
PrinceMyshkin
04-19-2010, 07:47 AM
Your economy, as ever, is marvellous.
Babyguile
04-19-2010, 08:06 AM
Perfect and beautiful :)
blazeofglory
04-19-2010, 08:22 AM
Splashes of red
Upon layers of blue;
Spray pints of revolt
In the depths of the tune.
The tune of the artist
Creating his piece,
The soil of soul,
His projected beliefs.
You said so much, Revolte, in a few lines. Of course I like a poem that touches the innermost of us, the unconscious or the primeval truth that still binds us.
I have no words and what I feel on the subconscious cannot be dug out. I am wordless
dizzydoll
04-19-2010, 10:06 AM
It feels like patriotism :patriot: Nice poem.
Hawkman
04-19-2010, 02:12 PM
Very clever Revolte and as Prince says, economically expressive. H
Revolte
04-19-2010, 04:32 PM
It feels like patriotism :patriot: Nice poem.
lol oops, I didnt mean for that to happen. I'm against nations lol. Whatever works though lol thanks.
tailor STATELY
04-20-2010, 12:19 AM
Images of graffiti wars on turf the boyz might fight over (philosophically of course) set to music.
Makes for a nice rap.
lallison
04-20-2010, 01:57 AM
I dig the synesthesia here, very artistic.
Revolte
04-20-2010, 04:09 AM
Thank you all so much!
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