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hillwalker
04-18-2010, 11:37 AM
I’LL RAISE A GLASS

I’ll raise a glass to your wriggly tail,
your tadpole head,
your blind insistence to survive;
immersed in quickened blood,
one goal
one singled cell
to blossom into life.

Without your sure direction
I would not be here,
another hand would write these lines,
their fate not mine.

PrinceMyshkin
04-18-2010, 11:40 AM
Extraordinary point of view - and admirable economy. Thanks

Buh4Bee
04-18-2010, 01:38 PM
To the reproduction of single cells.

hillwalker
04-18-2010, 01:39 PM
Thank you PM - just a little whimsical one I scribbled down this morning to contrast my previous poem 'Background Noise' which many have read but none have commented on (for good or bad).

Thank you