The sea of love

[haymanali]

I still see
your sweet smile
lingering timidly
on your shy lips
brushing mine

through my dreams
dolphin-like and docile
drowning softly secretly
in the warm sea of love
eternal and divine
inside of me

[Buh4Bee]

lovely language, quite romantic. Makes me want to be 18 again, well, maybe not. But very touching.

[Bar22do]

I still see
your sweet smile
lingering timidly
on your shy lips
brushing mine

through my dreams
dolphin-like and docile
drowning softly secretly
in the warm sea of love
eternal and divine
inside of me

after this, I'd definitely go back to my 18s... sooo romantic, makes me blush! thanks for sharing! and warm regards - bar

[haymanali]

Thanks a lot for your nice comments.:seeya::cheers2:

[blazeofglory]

I still see
your sweet smile
lingering timidly
on your shy lips
brushing mine

through my dreams
dolphin-like and docile
drowning softly secretly
in the warm sea of love
eternal and divine
inside of me

A romantic poem and of course this transports us to a time when we were too young and fantasizing everything

[lallison]

SEA OF LOVE (Honeydrippers)

Do you remember when we met
That's the day I knew you were my pet
I want to tell you how much I love you

Come with me, my love
To the sea, the sea of love
I want to tell you how much I love you

Come with me, to the sea

Do you remember when we met
That's the day I knew you were my pet
I want to tell you how much I love you

GUITAR SOLO

Come with me, to the sea

Come with me, my love
To the sea, the sea of love
I want to tell you how much I love you

Come with me, to the sea

Your poem is much better than the song! thanks

[Hawkman]

A nice little poem.

Personally, I can't write a love poem without laughing, so anyone who can gets a thumbs up from me.

Thanks for sharing. H