temptations of seduction

[stephanson]

i lunge deeper
into your soft and tender center
your skin so vibrant, glowing of ruby radience
as i plunge deeper, your juices trickle out and
cover my soft lips which insist this satisfactory pleasure
your core, untouchable
your delicate curves which tempt me
like a seduction
and to that i finish
all done, my red apple

[hillwalker]

Hmm. Those Australian apples must be really something.

Very sensuous and erotic. A skillful piece of writing.

And I was totally fooled - I was thinking 'plum' right to the end.

H

[stephanson]

Thankyou hillwalker, however i most credit my friend who wrote 3 of those lines when i wrote this 2 months ago.

it is fun leading the reader to believe something else untill the end

[hillwalker]

Exactly - a little bit of fun - putting a smile on someone else's face is worth all the effort.

[stephanson]

yes i agree completely. it also is nice to be happy sometimes because there is a reoccuring vibe in my poetry of disturbing or mournful themes, ideas and emotions.

[Haunted]

It blew me away. Great payoff. I totally enjoyed it.

[blazeofglory]

i lunge deeper
into your soft and tender center
your skin so vibrant, glowing of ruby radience
as i plunge deeper, your juices trickle out and
cover my soft lips which insist this satisfactory pleasure
your core, untouchable
your delicate curves which tempt me
like a seduction
and to that i finish
all done, my red apple

A fantabulous poem! I am wordless, and of course there is something honesty, sincerity and depth in here. Something beneath which everything else lies. We are lost on the surface and never tried to uncover the core, the most untouched and sensible part of us and indeed to a certain extent this poem did that job for us, honestly

[Bar22do]

Dripping with eroticism! but beautifully! thanks stephanson! and best rgds - Bar

[Il Dante]

And I was totally fooled - I was thinking 'plum' right to the end.
H

That's funny, because I was thinking 'zombie eating woman' right to the end. That may speak to something wrong with me... or it might speak to the skill of the poem.

As I was reading this at first I didn't like it because it was almost painfully vivid and I thought it had something to do with cannibalism or sexuality, or both. But then I read the last line and found out this poem is about an apple. And then I LOLed. Very, very clever poem. Cheers!

[lallison]

yummy, made me want to go and eat some fruit.

[dizzydoll]

Very good. I loved the title too, to mislead us.... :D

[Revolte]

This was great I loved it!

P.S. How can I go about getting one of those magic apples? :nod:

funny little side note: the t.v. is talking about bonding apples. I see they have some of those magic apples as well O.O