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N.W.Alexander
04-16-2010, 12:56 AM
The tossing and turning
to my minds yearning
possess impossible questions
to tomorrows journey

who's reasoning is more sufficient?
the man to the left or the man
in the darkest distance

for what we find upon further investigation
is a stagnant compass
who's equilibrium is uncomplacent

liberation is soli upon my shoulders
for all of society treats me
like a caged lion cub
who restlessly gets older

hear me now my adversary
I do not stand alone
against you
such is why I do not worry

to take up against me is to find defeat
not easy will it be to breathe
under the soles of my feet

haymanali
04-18-2010, 10:38 AM
Not mellifluous, but melodious verses due to good and correct usage of alliterative units, specially in the first stanza. A poem having an eloquent content.

N.W.Alexander
04-18-2010, 06:38 PM
hay thanks haha