Bad Voices

[nipper]

It's will is it's own.
It has thrown my ideals out.
Now it rests on a blackened alter.
It has gained my ear.
It's the one who killed off my idea of good.

[anzki4]

Please consider the fact that sometimes this can be a *very* busy section of the forums.

Everybody wants their poems read.

To be fair to others, if you are going to post more than one of your poems on the same day post them in the same thread.

Do not start a *new* thread for every single poem. It is not fair to others who also want their poems read.

This allows others who are also sharing their poetry to be seen and read as well, instead of getting bumped off the first page of threads because someone has posted numerous single poem/threads which, in excess, is called flooding and against the forum rules.

When you do post a new poem to your thread, it automatically 'bumps' it to the top of the list, which is ok to do.

Thank you for understanding
http://www.online-literature.com/forums/showthread.php?t=21394
Could you please follow that too.

And about the poem; I think it`s nice, in it`s own, negative way.

[blazeofglory]

It's will is it's own.
It has thrown my ideals out.
Now it rests on a blackened alter.
It has gained my ear.
It's the one who killed off my idea of good.

It is so short, crispy but the air of pessimism sweep us far